Surface and Orbit Authority

Proposal: Style & Editing Fixes

A very good friend volunteered to proofread the Charter, and suggested some editing changes. I believe these don’t change the rules, but they do fix the language.

I submit the following proposal:


Title: Editing & Style Fixes
Power: 4.0

In Article 1.2 (“Interpretation”), replace

must not be interpret

with

must not be interpreted

In Article 1.4 (“Organizational Goals”), replace

This Charter are designed

with

This Charter is designed

In Article 3.2 (“Joining & Leaving”), replace

my preferred pronouns

with

my pronouns

In Article 4.2 (“Harassment”), replace

requesting/assuming

with

requesting or assuming